- "How y'all bitches doing tonight?"
- Aneirin saved my life the day I met him, and saved it twice again before he finally killed me.
- C'mon, babe, please.
- “Miss Darling, at what point in our tenuous relationship did I grant you permission to call me anything but Edmund?”
- Mid-afternoon is usually quiet at a big cat refuge, but the lion’s roar drowned out Captain Russo’s voice on my cellphone.
- The apartment served not only as a trysting place, but a place of comfort and refuge."
- They met in a meat locker.
- Forever in a newborn stage, enveloped in darkness, and cushioned by a firm mattress, I dreamed of fireflies, at least my mind’s remembrance of them.
- The beginning of the end for Quentin-Andrew (or so it seemed at the time) came in the moment that he stepped into the shadow of Capital Mountain and was assaulted by a stranger.
- The day Mallory Lucius died they said the devil himself drove the carriage that took him to hell.
- Anyone who ever thought snow was soft and silent had never trudged through the bowels of Northern Canada in the middle of the night in mid-December with a thirty-pound pack strapped to his back and a hundred-pound thief complaining at his side.
- I'm upside-down and being stared at.
- The first time David Green saw Ariel, she was pinned against the lockers on the third floor, just outside the chemistry lab, being finger-fucked by a football player.
- The more you want something, the slower it is in arriving. I suppose this includes Italian trains.
- “What the hell are you doing?” Layna asked herself aloud and for the third time, she placed the telephone handset back in its base without pushing a single number.
- Steven walked slowly along the edge of the sidewalk, staring down at the occasional tufts of grass defiantly thrusting up through the dirt-filled cracks.
- Jared Byrne scowled at his hand-held crystal as he shifted on the flying carpet, trying to get comfortable on his way home from the University.
- Gerry composed Latin jazz tunes in his head every time he and Javier made love.
- Sunlight dapples the old temple walls, the ruins of a lost time.
- Christian Ryder sat in the dark, slowly stroking his fist up and down the length of his swollen cock.
- Holy Crap, he’s hot; the geek next door was seriously built.
- Craig grabbed hold of the hard cock waving in front of his face and fell back onto the sheet-covered king-sized bed, pulling Jack down on top of him.
- Tyris thought he would vomit.
Friday, May 09, 2008
First Line Contest--veinglory
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21 comments:
3 is lovely.
#2 is beautiful!
I'm going with #12
#2
#2 is interesting.
Definitely #2!
#10 gets my vote :D
#2 :D
#2 is the one that has the strongest "make you want to keep reading" factor for me, although some of the others were enticing for different reasons.
Hmm, since I recognise #2 and already read the book I'm not going to pick it.
Instead I'm going with #18.
High five, Linda. I’m also going with 18. (Emily, I already voted by email, so don’t count this comment vote.) Kinda odd so many people are going with 2 when it didn’t even make it onto my top 12 list.
Yeah, I went from 23 to 12 to 5 to 1.
18, it has class. You learn something about the character, and that he likes sex, or at least has it.
# 11.
11 is the one I most want to read now, though 2 and 13 are close behind.
Number 7. I'm not big on first lines...most of the time it feels like the writer is trying too hard. Number 7 makes me want to know more, it made me giggle. If it's a romance...I think it's a fab way to start.
Number 2 appealed to me the most.
#10
I like #18.
I like number 11.
Emily, I'm assuming we can't vote for ourselves....
I've seen #2 too many times before for it to have any impact.
I like #20. Although #13 and #11 and #7 were good too.
Don't know whether it's too late to join in... but number 11 for me.
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